[PATCH] README: add some commas for clarity

[PATCH] README: add some commas for clarity

[Robert Karszniewicz]

Signed-off-by: Robert Karszniewicz <avoidr@posteo.de>
---
 README | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README b/README
index d8077d21b..0a837b2de 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ in board/sandbox/env:
 
   # ./scripts/bareboxenv -s -p 0x10000 arch/sandbox/board/env env.bin
 
-To get some files to play with you can generate a cramfs image:
+To get some files to play with, you can generate a cramfs image:
   # mkcramfs somedir/ cramfs.bin
 
 The barebox image is a normal Linux executable, so it can be started
@@ -133,14 +133,14 @@ given with '-i' will appear as /dev/fd[n].
 
 If barebox finds a valid configuration sector on /dev/env0 it will
 load it to /env. It then executes /env/init if it exists. If you have
-loaded the example environment barebox will show you a menu asking for
+loaded the example environment, barebox will show you a menu asking for
 your settings.
 
-If you have started barebox as root you will find a new tap device on your
+If you have started barebox as root, you will find a new tap device on your
 host which you can configure using ifconfig. Once you configured bareboxs
-network settings accordingly you can do a ping or tftpboot.
+network settings accordingly, you can do a ping or tftpboot.
 
-If you have mapped a cramfs image try mounting it with
+If you have mapped a cramfs image, try mounting it with
 
   # mkdir /cram
   # mount /dev/fd0 cramfs /cram
-- 
2.28.0


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Re: [PATCH] README: add some commas for clarity

[Sascha Hauer]

On Sat, Sep 19, 2020 at 04:55:58PM +0200, Robert Karszniewicz wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Robert Karszniewicz <avoidr@posteo.de>
> ---
>  README | 10 +++++-----
>  1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/README b/README

Applied, thanks

Sascha

> index d8077d21b..0a837b2de 100644
> --- a/README
> +++ b/README
> @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ in board/sandbox/env:
>  
>    # ./scripts/bareboxenv -s -p 0x10000 arch/sandbox/board/env env.bin
>  
> -To get some files to play with you can generate a cramfs image:
> +To get some files to play with, you can generate a cramfs image:
>    # mkcramfs somedir/ cramfs.bin
>  
>  The barebox image is a normal Linux executable, so it can be started
> @@ -133,14 +133,14 @@ given with '-i' will appear as /dev/fd[n].
>  
>  If barebox finds a valid configuration sector on /dev/env0 it will
>  load it to /env. It then executes /env/init if it exists. If you have
> -loaded the example environment barebox will show you a menu asking for
> +loaded the example environment, barebox will show you a menu asking for
>  your settings.
>  
> -If you have started barebox as root you will find a new tap device on your
> +If you have started barebox as root, you will find a new tap device on your
>  host which you can configure using ifconfig. Once you configured bareboxs
> -network settings accordingly you can do a ping or tftpboot.
> +network settings accordingly, you can do a ping or tftpboot.
>  
> -If you have mapped a cramfs image try mounting it with
> +If you have mapped a cramfs image, try mounting it with
>  
>    # mkdir /cram
>    # mount /dev/fd0 cramfs /cram
> -- 
> 2.28.0
> 
> 
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