[PATCH] Documentation: Minor editing changes to filesystems content.

[PATCH] Documentation: Minor editing changes to filesystems content.

[Robert P. J. Day]

Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday@crashcourse.ca>

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diff --git a/Documentation/filesystems/nfs.rst b/Documentation/filesystems/nfs.rst
index b8ad4f3..f4eda5d 100644
--- a/Documentation/filesystems/nfs.rst
+++ b/Documentation/filesystems/nfs.rst
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 NFS Support
 ===========

-barebox has readonly support for NFSv3 un UDP mode.
+barebox has readonly support for NFSv3 in UDP mode.

 Example::

diff --git a/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs.rst b/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs.rst
index 70e7282..b7ece1a 100644
--- a/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs.rst
+++ b/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs.rst
@@ -3,10 +3,10 @@
 RAM filesystem
 ==============

-ramfs is a simple malloc based filesystem. An instance of ramfs is
-mounted during startup on /. The filesystem type passed to mount is
-'ramfs'
+ramfs is a simple malloc-based filesystem. An instance of ramfs is
+mounted during startup on /. The filesystem type passed to ``mount``
+is ``ramfs``.

-example::
+Example::

   mount none ramfs /somedir
diff --git a/Documentation/filesystems/tftp.rst b/Documentation/filesystems/tftp.rst
index 273be5e..e0a1159 100644
--- a/Documentation/filesystems/tftp.rst
+++ b/Documentation/filesystems/tftp.rst
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ TFTP support
 barebox has read/write support for the Trivial File Transfer Protocol.

 TFTP is not designed as a filesystem. It does not have support for listing
-directories. This means a :ref:`command_ls` to a TFTP mounted path will show an empty
-directory. Nevertheless the files are there.
+directories. This means a :ref:`command_ls` to a TFTP-mounted path will show an empty
+directory. Nevertheless, the files are there.

 Example::


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Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Minor editing changes to filesystems content.

[Sascha Hauer]

On Sat, Jun 28, 2014 at 06:22:39AM -0400, Robert P. J. Day wrote:
> 
> Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday@crashcourse.ca>

Applied, thanks

Sascha

> 
> ---
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/filesystems/nfs.rst b/Documentation/filesystems/nfs.rst
> index b8ad4f3..f4eda5d 100644
> --- a/Documentation/filesystems/nfs.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/filesystems/nfs.rst
> @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
>  NFS Support
>  ===========
> 
> -barebox has readonly support for NFSv3 un UDP mode.
> +barebox has readonly support for NFSv3 in UDP mode.
> 
>  Example::
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs.rst b/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs.rst
> index 70e7282..b7ece1a 100644
> --- a/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs.rst
> @@ -3,10 +3,10 @@
>  RAM filesystem
>  ==============
> 
> -ramfs is a simple malloc based filesystem. An instance of ramfs is
> -mounted during startup on /. The filesystem type passed to mount is
> -'ramfs'
> +ramfs is a simple malloc-based filesystem. An instance of ramfs is
> +mounted during startup on /. The filesystem type passed to ``mount``
> +is ``ramfs``.
> 
> -example::
> +Example::
> 
>    mount none ramfs /somedir
> diff --git a/Documentation/filesystems/tftp.rst b/Documentation/filesystems/tftp.rst
> index 273be5e..e0a1159 100644
> --- a/Documentation/filesystems/tftp.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/filesystems/tftp.rst
> @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ TFTP support
>  barebox has read/write support for the Trivial File Transfer Protocol.
> 
>  TFTP is not designed as a filesystem. It does not have support for listing
> -directories. This means a :ref:`command_ls` to a TFTP mounted path will show an empty
> -directory. Nevertheless the files are there.
> +directories. This means a :ref:`command_ls` to a TFTP-mounted path will show an empty
> +directory. Nevertheless, the files are there.
> 
>  Example::
> 
> 
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